Title: Russia Georgia
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According to news agency Deutsche, is a good title because it summarizes and presents the novel made into a single line. It is also a complete sentence, simple, direct and impressive. Reflects the lead content of the note. Not separated by a comma or a dash and does not include acronyms, abbreviations or unfamiliar names. Lead
information: The war in the Caucasus has taken a new dimension after Russia expanded its offensive in Georgia yesterday beyond the breakaway territories of Abkhazia and South Ossetia, and under his control. Russian troops entered the western Georgian region in Senaki, as is the first full-scale invasion of a sovereign country after the disintegration of the Soviet Union. In addition, the Government of Georgia claimed that Russian forces had overrun South Ossetia to take Gori, the second largest city, and his army retreated to protect the capital, Tbilisi, 60 miles. While
answers five basic questions, your single reading does not give a correct and complete fact. Is very long, more than 5 lines proposed by the agency Deutsche.
thus I would arm the lead, yesterday Russian troops invaded the city of Senaki military base and the ground to prevent further attacks against South Ossetia. The Russian advance came after the Georgian president, Mikhail Saakashvili, signed a unilateral ceasefire. U.S., NATO and the European Union condemned the attack and demanded Russia to stop the offensive.
Title: A material created in the U.S. becomes invisible
objects would be more direct: "A layer becomes invisible objects." Then in the fall, would specify that U.S. researchers are treated. Lead
information: Researchers have achieved a new milestone in the scientific and technological careers in search of a coat of invisibility, a material capable of making invisible any object it covers. Since 2006, a group built one of these materials, but it worked only with microwave light.
is very general. It should specify a little more in order to layer, why this is news. U.S. researchers found a layer that is able to turn invisible to any object it covers. The mechanism is to interact with light waves differently from how it does all other known materials. The work, to be published this week in the journals Nature and Science, are financed by the Navy and U.S. Air Force, which could make military use of this material.
Title: Opposition denounces Argentina Marsans by airlines
's right. Keep in mind that this is a English newspaper. Lead
information: The main opposition party in Argentina, the Radical Civic Union (UCR), today filed a complaint Marsans criminal charges against managers and officials of the Government of Cristina Fernandez de Kirchner Peronist for the alleged "hollowing out of Aerolineas Argentinas, whose ownership is in transition between the English group and the Argentine state.
outlines what the note said. It is precise and clear. If it were an Argentine newspaper, the lead information should be: The president of the Radical Civic Union, Gerardo Morales, today filed a criminal complaint against executives and government officials Marsans. The senator predicted that those accused of the "crime of mismanagement of resources that the Argentine government gave the company that created the emptying of airline Aerolineas Argentinas. "
Title: German police dismantled a colony
Nazi youth clearly reflects what it says on the note information
Lead: The 39 children and young people were housed in 14 tents that formed a camp in the peaceful landscape near Güstrow in Mecklenburg-West Pomerania. The children had books with songs and studied Nazi racist texts. Part of the camp was decorated with swastikas and other symbols illegal.
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fixed: police German band broke up a Nazi youth in Mecklenburg-West Pomerania. The youths, who were housed in 14 tents, racist texts studied, and part of the camp was decorated with swastikas and other symbols illegal. Three months ago the authorities had searched the offices of the organizing group, the Patriotic German Youth (HDJ). Editorials
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